cyberen's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Couple]

you have potential.

here are some things I would improve.

1. for things that aren't going to move seperately, flatten them and put them together. with the thoughts fading in and out, it won't look as bad if you flatten all of it together so it doesn't look weird.
2. add some sound effects.
3. I get the joke, some others may laugh at it, but I'd suggest sneaking in another gag just in case.

InProgress responds:

ok thank you for the tips. :)

[WoW - Cloudsong]

sorry to rate this so low

but A: you got this joke off of YTMND, so this isn't even original

B: the graphics were extremely lacking, your efforts to make the outraged user emote fails miserably.

C: some things are better left to the imagination.

[Reviewer Pwnage!]

awesome, dude

this was so much fun to watch, I hope you make more!

[Pube Mupit Dies]

FOOL!

you cannot kill the pube muppet.

[support our soldiers in i]

you fail.

there is no animation, no originality, one song, and one really shitty message. if I wanted a blatant pro-american crapcake with extra BS, i'll visit the white house website.

[The Non-Livingstons #002]

wow

AMAZING!

[NG Parodies 3 Teaser]

I'd like to see more parodies

of the following things:
sprite movies that are poorly mashed together
clay movies that are boring and everyone sounds the same
numa numa
YAAFM (you're a fucking moron)
clock crew or other associated flashes that pass just because of mass voting
flash movies that are just a video pasted in it.
flash movies where everyone is in the same profile position and animation is only done with tweening of limbs.
endless unamusing loops (sometimes seizure-inducing)

thanks.

XxShadowMasterxX responds:

1.sprite movies that are poorly mashed together
Now that someone said it, I will add it

2.clay movies that are boring and everyone sounds the same
I'll have to buy some play doo lol

3.numa numa

in the first flash I made NG parodies 1

4.YAAFM
i remember that.. lol

5.clock crew or other associated flashes that pass just because of mass voting

I wasn't gonna do another one (cause i did one in #2) but its gonna happen

6.flash movies that are just a video pasted in it.

In NG parodies 2

7.flash movies where everyone is in the same profile position and animation is only done with

in either #1 or #2 but its in one

8.endless unamusing loops (sometimes seizure-inducing)
in both #1 and #2 lol

thank for your request.. :D

[World of Starcraft Ep1 RM]

a good Starcraft flash.

however I would suggest you pay more attention to detail, the Golaiths were way too small and didn't look like the ones in the game, and Zerg blood is red. A decent try at humor, however you should try finding another voice actor because the two main characters are exactly the same except for skin color. Are they supposed to be ghosts or marines? The observer gag in the bathroom is funny, you could have done more with that.