cyberen's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[3D brothers]

good for a 3-D flash

instead of most the other 3-D flashes, this one actually had a story. But I would have liked to see a floor and wall object seperately. But I do appreciate trying to make something amusing under 3 megs and you did it well.

[A Super Mario Story I]

OMFG

this flash does not suck. In fact, the quality of the graphics make me eager to see the next part!

[The History of Mario]

to explain

the 10s in the other categories are to make up for the fact that I could only give you a ten in humor, when in reality I wish I could give you 100.

[The Banjo Collection]

awesome

finally, a Banjo-Kazooie flash. granted it would have been funnier if you tried to voice a stupid hick and a bitchy bird yourself, this is still some funny shit.

[Mario's 5th Element (1up)]

luigi sure has a nice singing voice.

the only thing I'd suggest is to not make the film so dark. other than that, this is perfect!

[G.W. Bush flip flopper]

someone doesn't know what they're reviewing.

I'd prefer some text quotes in the movie along with sources, but hey, this flash is still good, no matter what anyone says.

[Doodieman: The Hero's Loa]

I rated it a "1"

cause it made poop look good.

honestly, this has some excellent graphics, but could you think of a more compelling story than DOODIEMAN?

[Dare to Be Bush]

not as good as it could be

the potential was there, but I wish it was more than a slideshow and an animated gif. try some flashing graphics or something to capture the energy of the song.

[SBL is in hatred 4]

epic, but has its flaws.

I'd have to say that this is one of the most enjoyable clock films to watch, but I feel a few things could be improved on it:

the spelling of the subtitles needed to be spell-checked, and entire words were missing.

there were some frames missing symbols, which lessen the professional look of the flash altogether

as far as the action went, I wish there was more than simple tweening. just a few frame-by-frame animations would look really well.

there were sound effects for some things, like the gunshots and doors shutting, but other things like the car driving off and a missile being launched had no sound, providing an inconsistent presentation.

Also, I'd personally prefer it if there was music throughout the movie, because it would add lots of depth to the story.

But I still really like this piece, and hope this advice only serves to make your next movie even more spectacular!

LollypopClock responds:

I really rushed on the subtitles, in fact I finished them in 20 minutes then submitted the movie a few minutes later. As for the missing sound and needed music, I thought NG still had the under 5,000 Kb limit(I guess it might be gone since the movie is 5,051Kb) so I really had to cut down on some graphics and delete some scenes & sounds altogether. You also said that the car had no sound but I did have sound for it. Well i'm glad you liked the movie despite the flaws.

[pube mupit gets license!1]

pure genius

your own creation has taken on a life of its own and the world thanks you.